Friday, 29 January 2016

IB Mock Exam Wednesday 3rd February

IB Mock preparation – POTENTIAL WRITING TASKS FOR PAPER 2
·      Write a letter to the editor
Respectful introduction – give some context/background information
Ideas
·         I am writing this letter in order to express my annoyance/disgust/ disappointment
·         Having recently read your article dated 17th November, I felt compelled to write this letter in order to express my opinions
·         I regularly read your ______ and it has for a long time provided many interesting ideas…
·         I am a fan of your work and I would like to offer you my point of view on…
Logical order –
Introduction explaining who you are
Clear order of paragraphs – background information
                                               address what the issue is
                                               explain purpose of letter
                                               give opinion (forceful or respectful, positive or negative!)
                                               offer alternatives
                                               ask question/look for decision
                                               finish respectfully (I look forward to receiving your response)

·      Write an essay
§  Remember to TONE is ACADEMIC and purposeful.
§  NO Rhetorical Questions!
§  Make the point of the essay clear in the first paragraphs!
§  Order your ideas
§  Use lots of connectives!
Useful structures
Introduction
It is generally accepted nowadays that …
A controversial issue/topic/problem which often divides opinion is …
A crucial issue nowadays is the
A challenging issue/problem …
Nowadays, ______is becoming an increasing concern.
Nowadays, there is widespread concern about …
Over the last 20 years, ________ has been a
The issue of _______ opens up a very interesting debate …
It is a vital/ critical/ crucial/ fundamental/ essential/ key  problem or issue in society.
Originally / At first / Initially
Currently / At the moment / Nowadays
In recent history …
Since the beginning of time …
History has been littered with examples of …
For many old/young people, this issue is crucial because it has a direct impact on their lives.
Clearly, such a development can have both positive and negative implications
Thus it is having a huge impact ON …
In view of this/ in light of this …

Opinions and arguments for MAIN BODY
Some argue that the problem began…
Whereas others trace it back to ….
Some sceptics claim that …
While I understand this point …
Taking this into consideration,
Although I think… others believe that …
While there is certainly … there is also …
As well as …., there is also …
To achieve this, society/the government should …
The short/long term effects may be …
However, a positive impact has been …
Moreover, this may mean that …
Without a shadow of a doubt/needless to say/clearly/in
fact
Firstly/secondly/Thirdly
In addition to + gerund (in addition to increasing ….), we
also need to …
For this to be successful, there should be …
In theory this seems like … however in practice …
Time phrases
 Shortly afterwards / shortly before
In the short term… / In the long term
Recently there has been an increase in …
Set structures
Due to the fact that …
Due to the lack of …
Despite the fact that …
As a direct consequence,
This is in part due to …
Passive voice structures
It is often suggested that …
It has been suggested that …
It is widely believed that …
It is often said that …
It has been suggested that…

Conclusion
 In conclusion,
Hopefully / It is hoped that …
The … is expected to …
While I believe that we should … others strongly
believe that …
Taking all this into account, it is clear that ...
All in all, ...
To sum, this crucial issue needs to be dealt with by
implementing ...
In conclusion, the facts suggest that ..

CONNECTIVES
1) To add: and, furthermore, in addition, what is more, to add, moreover
2) To contrast: but, although, though, despite, in spite of, however, nevertheless, yet, whereas, while, conversely, alternatively
3) To give reason: because, since, due to, as, owing to,because of
4) To give a result: therefore, consequently, so
5)To show sequence: firstly, secondly, finally, lastly, last
but not least
6) To summarise/ conclude: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, in summary, in short, to conclude



·      Write a leaflet
DO NOT FOLD YOUR EXAM PAPER UP
Audience is very important – this will determine the type of language that you use.
Consider the purpose of the leaflet – is it to persuade people to take part in activities? is it to persuade people to join a club? IF SO – you need to use persuasive devices, you need to make it sound very appealing, you need to describe it well and make it very clear. Lots of personal pronouns and finish with plenty of imperatives! Go and do it! You can make the difference!
Consider the purpose of the leaflet – is it to inform people about a health issue? is it to inform people about an upcoming event or change in school /university/ town centre?
This will mean that persuasive devices are not needed – you will need to give lots of clear information and give some background history. Details! will be the key to this type of leaflet. Think: Does this leaflet inform people of what to do?
Lots of sub- headings are needed. You can use bullet points but they need to make sense and help the purpose of your leaflet.

·      Write a blog
Blog is the space for personal thoughts and personal opinions. You can be funny, creative and inventive.
But remember - the order, and paragraphs of your blog post need to make sense. Have in mind that the audience are one click away if they get bored. So your task is to keep them entertained and make them feel like they know what is going on.
It would be a good idea to make reference to the fact that it is online so “check the link out below” “click here to view more” etc.
But the blog is personal – consider the purpose of the post. What is the topic? Who will read the blog post? Change your language according to this…
You can have a look at Mr Sellick’s blog from England to get a sense of what blog posts are and how varied they can be http://555words.com/topics/ – but remember, all posts have been planned in detail before being written. This is not an easy task but it is, or rather, could be a very enjoyable one.

·        Write an article for a school magazine
An article is opinion based. But, it has to have more of a formal structure than the blog. You will need a heading/headline for your article and this will be judged when being marked.
Again, paragraphs are vital and the order of what you are saying is key.
Normally, articles have one clear point that they wish to make. They often use statistics and anecdotes/examples to support their claims and give them more substance. Where your article will appear determines the change in language style and you must again consider the purpose of the article.
You will not use personal pronouns as much as you would in a blog post. This is because you are talking to a more of a general and varied audience. e.g in a BLOG = “here you are sitting reading this post that I wrote”, ARTICLE = “many people will be wondering why this is such an important issue to consider”
·      Write an email/ letter to a friend
It is your friend, so make sure it is obvious that you actually know them. You must open by sounding happy “great to hear from you” etc. Maybe ask a few relevant, informal questions at the start or “hope the family is well and your Dog hasn’t died yet!”
Contractions always Don’t, Can’t, Won’t. But do not write WANNA and COS!!
Order is still important. Make sure you stay on topic and provide plenty of detail in the form of your own opinion!
PARAGRAPHS!! – Think about what you want to say to them before you start writing. It is not like Whatsapp where you can just randomly talk about nonsense. There needs to be some order – after all, you’re going to the trouble of writing an email or a letter.
Consider the time differences – emails will be read there and then (normally on a daily basis)… Letter will take time to arrive.
Tone will be informal but again depending on the purpose of the letter/email, you will need to maybe inform, persuade, argue etc…
·      Write a talk or a speech to… class mates/ colleagues/ residents
Firstly, the audience is the key! You must write appropriate to age and relationship with the people in front of you.
Persuasive or informative – these speeches will be very differenct – consider what happens in a leaflet again.
But the key to a good speech or talk is making the audience feel important. So, inclusive pronouns “We, you, us”… Personal experience “I”, Rhetorical questions and anecdotes to give your speech more validity. Common ending is to go for imperatives with “now is the chance to make the change – do it, go there, vote for this, vote for that”.
Rhetorical devices – REPETITION REPETITION REPETITION… How many times did Martin Luther King Jr say “I have a dream”? = learn from the best!
Detail and substance are vital and therefore, like all of the above:
PLANNING AND PARAGRAPHS!




The Written Assignment: DEADLINE 19th FEBRUARY 2016 - 3 weeks to go!

REMEMBER: YOUR W.A IS YOUR RESPONSIBILITY!


20% OF YOUR I.B GRADE

33% CRIT C CAMPUS GRADE FOR TERM 2

***YOU LOSE MARKS/ FAIL IF YOU UPLOAD WORK AFTER DEADLINE***


How is it assessed?

Crit A: Rationale and Task (10 marks)
Task clearly introduced in rationale
Task successfully addresses subject and aim on rationale
Appropriate choice of text type

Crit BOrganisation and development (6 marks)
Ideas organised and developed

Crit CLanguage (8 marks)

Appropriate and effective language for task

Important skills for Written Assignment
1) The ability to read and understand a source thoughtfully and independently (only ONE sources can be audiovisual)
2) Form your own opinion on the topic
3) Extract relevant material from what has been read
4) Express that view through an appropriate text type, whose conventions they can handle
5) Make reference to each of your 3 or 4 sources in a way which is appropriate and relevant for your text type

Useful websites





How to write a good essay For your Written Assignment:
Essays are not distinguished by any particularly strong features of physical layout or format, but rather by a distinctive organisation of ideas.
Basic Format
-stated sense of purpose / aim an effective and clear introduction to the issue or question
-introduction + conclusion these should effectively embody the 'sense of purpose'
-clear organisation : both in terms of the individual steps of the argument, and in terms of the overall pattern of the argument.
-clear and appropriate paragraphing emphasising the logical steps of the argument
-Lots of connectives
Approach
Øregister - consistent and formal

Ørange of aspects considered - There should be a sense that different arguments are explored – if only to disagree with some of them. Actual balance between, say Pro & Con, will depend on the task specified.


Introductory phrases

NowadaysRecentlythere is widespread concern about …
Not only do think (one idea) but also think (a different idea)
Throughout historythere has been …
History has been littered with examples of …
In the past there has been many examples of …
In the (nearfuturemaybe there will be
Despite (+noun OR + gerund)
e.g  Despite the protests …
  Despite hating protests 
It is a vital/ critical/ crucial/ fundamental/ essential/ key  problem or issue in society
The relevance of/the awareness of this issue is crucial because
Clearly, it is inevitable/unavoidable/inescapable to be concerned about this issue
As an engaged/ informed/ educated/ thoughtful/ critical citizen, it is …

Connectives

1) To addand, furthermore, in additionwhat is more, to addmoreover
2) To contrastbutalthoughthoughdespite, in spite of, howeverneverthelessyetwhereaswhile
3) To give reasonbecausesincedue to, as, owing to, because of
4) To give a resultthereforeconsequently, so, as a result
5)To show sequencefirstlysecondlyfinallylastlylast but not least
6) To summariseconcludeto sum up, in conclusion, in brief, in summary, in short, to conclude

Powerful verbs

To impact upon/ to affect
To give rise to …
To raise awareness  of …
To give weight to …
To urge/to encourage
To retaliate
To initiate
To trigger/to spark (something)
To cost lives
To take steps towards
To reach an agreement
To be declared independent
To seek/strive for independence
To solve/ resolve
To take into account

Linking phrases
… culminated in… (ended in …)
…resulted in…
… led to ….
… was caused by …
…was said to be …
…is still thought to be…

Summarising

- Taking all this into account, it is clear that ...
- All in all, ...
- To sum, this crucial issue needs to be dealt with by implementing ...
- In conclusion, the facts suggest that ...